Post by princessoftides on Apr 21, 2006 14:22:48 GMT -5
Name: Surfer Girl Age: Adult Type: Earth Gender: F Body color: Dark blue Hair color: Aqua mixed with streaks of silver-grey and white Eye color: Dark Green Symbol: Orange surfboard with two yellow stripes down the middle Cutie mark (if they have one): Starfish Personality/temperament: Laidback and easy going, nothing ever seems to bother her. She likes nothing better than to surf the waves or relax on the beach. Powers: None History: Born on the seashore, Surfer is one laid back beach bum of a pony. Rarely does anything phase her because she is so easy going. Her parents used to own a surf shop, where she got her first shortboard. When Surfer was barely out of her youth, her older brother Waverider was killed in a surfing accident, which caused her parents to close the surf shop. Even though she was terribly upset by the loss of her beloved older brother, Surfer was still determined to ride the waves. Her parents protested and even kicked her out of their home for awhile. But she couldn't stop..surfing was in her blood. She knew she was almost as at home on the water as a Seapony and couldn't stay away for long. Trying to please her parents, Surfer did finally try to stay away from the water for awhile, but after a few months, she knew it would be impossible. Eventually, her parents accepted the fact that their daughter was born to ride the waves despite the danger it posed. Birthplace: The shores of Xanadia
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Post by Dark Crescent on Apr 22, 2006 3:44:07 GMT -5
Hullo and welcome to Xanadia!
Your character sounds okay, but could you add a bit more onto the history section? You know, what has she been doing most of her life, does she have family, anything interesting that might have happened to her, that sort of thing. Also the personality could use just a little more content, if you can flesh her out a little, it would be good.
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Post by princessoftides on May 2, 2006 10:25:50 GMT -5
Name: Etoile de Soir (Star of Night) Age: Adult Type: Merpony Gender: M Body color: Sky blue Hair color: dark, mossy green mixed with lighter, grass green Eye color: Purple Symbol:Silver star Cutie mark (if they have one):N/A Personality/temperament: Quite a leader and popular among the other Mers in his 'school' (group). He's always in charge of his emotions, no matter how strong and never lets anyone down.Or he tries not to anyway. Powers: None History: Born off the coast of Xanadia, he has lived his entire life inside the insular 'school' of parents, family members and other relatives that make up the group. The youngers of seven brothers and sisters, he has always had to try and outdo them or be better at them in competitions. This made him a natural leader within the other mers his age. Unlike most mers, he has a silver star birthmark on his left side, near his tailfin. It is said that the reason this birthmark occurs every so often in his 'school' is because that several generations ago one of his male relatives had a passionate affair with an Earther pony who lived at the seashore. It is also said that this earther gave birth to twins..one Earther and one more mer-like. The mer-like twin had no choice but to be raised in the sea, adopted by a school of Mers. But because of her part-earth heritage, the mer-like twin carried an unusual birthmark which cropped up every now and then among her descendants. Birthplace: The ocean, off the coast of Xanadia